A new idea for new students in English section

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Remember every buddy the topic of the day is write to somaone you care about I’m waiting for a beautifull responses

unfortunately I don't have the skill to express

[أبو أحمد%]

wonderfull work

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رجلُ من سفَر Peace and mercy upon you I thank you brother for this amazing topic Let me apologize for the punctuation problem in this forum And welcome all our friends in this section Actually I have no idea what I will tell you in this reply But I am in habit of writing about my feelings, my fear, and my memories So, here I am trying to write about "the journey of the hope" ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Like a yellow ear that dance with the wind next to the sunset He sat there, with his foot dangle above the ocean, and asked the ocean How many ship didn't arrive and won't arrive Gave a long gaze at the sky and said : When I was a child, I idolize this live , I was laden with pink dreams I searched in all places for my existence, lies , And my voice that went and wasn't echoed back Everybody in this live will get handful of dreams or lies And take them with him everywhere then disappear in an abandoned lane later, the lane will echo with his shouts : Where am I ? They told me that I can do it They said I will survive Then he will calm And walk three steps towards , Then guess what .. ! he will get out from his dark lane And find himself here, on this stranger beach Oooooooooooooh ocean Were we all under the illusion Which secret are you keep from us Why were we all limping when we cross the abandoned lanes Is it our fate, choice, kindness That lead us to this dead end lanes…again and again Should we be haggled even for our dreams and now you have a great chance to lament yourself, and let your memories hang over the ocean The old man turn round with his back to the ocean and leave his footprint on the beach These footprint won't fade away ….ever … ever الشكر لصاحب الموضوع مع ملاحظة أن حرف التنكير الذي سبق New students غير صحيح لانتفائه بالجمع تحية,

I’ve been waiting for you for long ..long time age .
O my Allah..your words ,wonderful,and more than that .It’s beautiful story.
Allah bless you ,and masha’allah there is no any mistake. you are unique in your type of writing. Please be here always,and give us your advise .
Thank you my big brother
Note ,where the red words or you didn’t use one.
your sister ,Raghad

[حلاها زايد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رجلُ من سفَر Peace and mercy upon you I thank you brother for this amazing topic Let me apologize for the punctuation problem in this forum And welcome all our friends in this section Actually I have no idea what I will tell you in this reply But I am in habit of writing about my feelings, my fear, and my memories So, here I am trying to write about "the journey of the hope" ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………… Like a yellow ear that dance with the wind next to the sunset He sat there, with his foot dangle above the ocean, and asked the ocean How many ship didn't arrive and won't arrive Gave a long gaze at the sky and said : When I was a child, I idolize this live , I was laden with pink dreams I searched in all places for my existence, lies , And my voice that went and wasn't echoed back Everybody in this live will get handful of dreams or lies And take them with him everywhere then disappear in an abandoned lane later, the lane will echo with his shouts : Where am I ? They told me that I can do it They said I will survive Then he will calm And walk three steps towards , Then guess what .. ! he will get out from his dark lane And find himself here, on this stranger beach Oooooooooooooh ocean Were we all under the illusion Which secret are you keep from us Why were we all limping when we cross the abandoned lanes Is it our fate, choice, kindness That lead us to this dead end lanes…again and again Should we be haggled even for our dreams and now you have a great chance to lament yourself, and let your memories hang over the ocean The old man turn round with his back to the ocean and leave his footprint on the beach These footprint won't fade away ….ever … ever الشكر لصاحب الموضوع مع ملاحظة أن حرف التنكير الذي سبق New students غير صحيح لانتفائه بالجمع تحية,

I glad to have you here with us
really you are special and you have talent masha'aAlla
i wish you happiness and success

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة حلاها زايد unfortunately I don't have the skill to express

Noooooooooooooooo
Please!!!!! stop saying that you can do it just try even for a lettle bit ok ,and don’t be anther Abduallh both of you can do it ,and much ..much better than me so try ..try ..try..try

I want see your exprass soon as you can

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious Wonderful topic masha'aAllah My dear parents , day after day , I feel that we are one soul which can be separated . Since I was a baby , and once I open my eyes, I found myself attaching to you . 20 years and more I have spend them with you under one roof , we spend happy and sad moments together .May Allah protect you for me and reward you for all the things that u have done for my sake ." I know that I can never ever pay for all the debts u lent me in my days ". May Allah gather us also in the Paradise with our prophet Muhammad peace be upon him

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Your message is
beautiful ,and have a pure love .Allah protect them for you ,and protect all parents around the world Allah willing .
Thank you ,I learn alot from you my sister .

[إلهام]

my grandfather
I can't imagine my life without him . He is the father, the brother , furthermore , he is the biggest person in my family. We have to respect him. 20 years ago ,when I opened my eyes ,, I meant (Since I was born, I found him beside me ).
One year ago , he became afflicted with a strange illness suddenly. One month ago, he was able to walk and go to the masjid daily . recently ,I can say .. I think that's impossible to pass a day without crying of someone.. anyone in my house.. now ,he can't walk anymore or talk like before

I want from you just pray for him

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Elham

[Conscientious]

May Allah cure ur grandfather Elham

and protect him

[العواض ظاهر]

Iam Sory

[رغد محمد]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن In fact, I cannot describe my feeling when I finished reading these words a beautiful dream ??????????????????????? :4 5: sorry I cannot express no comment

Thank you my brother

The orange color is the mistakes after correct it