the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Suzi]

Hollla I have problem in writing coz I dropped out ( Writing 2) last sems so be patient with me :$

Thnx 4 all

[رغد محمد]

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Hellow every body

Ammm ... I know that I'm late, but I want to shair with you my writing

Please correct it for me please

Thank you soOo much

Raghad



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[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious I will correct ur essay guys when u agree on one topic and one type of essay otherwise i can's just correct it randomly i can only correct according to what i learned from my instructors at university , i can't just invent a new way of correction and then wrong members by choosing the winner And to be frank , i know that English boy have not studied these types of the essays in the university because boys section is different from ours so he may not be able to correct following the same rules of comparison and contrast essay , that's why i don't blame him :)a so what i'm saying , i prefer that English boy will be the judge of this stage coz it's like a free writing and i'll be for the next stage which won't be free (one topic , one type)a and we will be together for the final stage what do u think English boy ?

well let's break this down! here we've got 4 finished essays so far & fortunately 2 of them about Ramdan. The rest 2 are about social network! it seems u mind urs & I'll care of mine! fairenough ..

about studying such ruls! I don't think ours is much different from urs but in some cases we don't have to follow ruls cuz it's just for the begaining then u can do ur essays smoothly regardless structures, ruls, process..etc

anyway, if u are agreed on that just let me know! I will be doing this and I'll give comments on each answer sheet. u will announce the final results and the winner.

[English boy]

I deeply injoied this! I can honestly tell that all of guys did great .. it's hard to tell who's the best but check ur OUDS for results lol

Now it's all urs Con.. waiting for ur action

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Suzi Hollla I have problem in writing coz I dropped out ( Writing 2) last sems so be patient with me :$ Thnx 4 all

suzi i did n't know that but thank you for participating with us

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد ،’ Hellow every body Ammm ... I know that I'm late, but I want to shair with you my writing Please correct it for me please Thank you soOo much Raghad ’،

Ragad thank you sooooo much

[MS.Fabulous]

thank you every one it was really fun
and exciting

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy well let's break this down! here we've got 4 finished essays so far & fortunately 2 of them about Ramdan. The rest 2 are about social network! it seems u mind urs & I'll care of mine! fairenough .. about studying such ruls! I don't think ours is much different from urs but in some cases we don't have to follow ruls cuz it's just for the begaining then u can do ur essays smoothly regardless structures, ruls, process..etc anyway, if u are agreed on that just let me know! I will be doing this and I'll give comments on each answer sheet. u will announce the final results and the winner.

ok i'll correct them all like what u did but u have to give me time coz i'm conscientious in my correction loooool

by the way there are a lot of things u neglected in malak's essay look at my correction and tell me ur opinion *_^ a

about choosing the winner give every member her mark out of 20 and we will count it with mine and see who will get the highest mark ok


thanx a lot English boy

[Conscientious]

Malak u did well

but u have be careful about Run-on and fragment and to avoid this thing don't write long sentences, ur sentences actually are
so long taking four lines or more

second use supiorior words . for example use exact words instead of bad or good

u don't have many grammatical mistakes , or misspelling

Good luck malak wait ur result

[Conscientious]

Miss Fabulous

well done

this is yours