the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Suzi]

Hollla I have problem in writing coz I dropped out ( Writing 2) last sems so be patient with me :$

Thnx 4 all

[رغد محمد]

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Hellow every body

Ammm ... I know that I'm late, but I want to shair with you my writing

Please correct it for me please

Thank you soOo much

Raghad



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[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد ،’ Hellow every body Ammm ... I know that I'm late, but I want to shair with you my writing Please correct it for me please Thank you soOo much Raghad ’،

Ragad thank you sooooo much

[MS.Fabulous]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Suzi Hollla I have problem in writing coz I dropped out ( Writing 2) last sems so be patient with me :$ Thnx 4 all

suzi i did n't know that but thank you for participating with us

[English boy]

I deeply injoied this! I can honestly tell that all of guys did great .. it's hard to tell who's the best but check ur OUDS for results lol

Now it's all urs Con.. waiting for ur action

[MS.Fabulous]

thank you every one it was really fun
and exciting

[Conscientious]

English boy

about the marks let's set a date and a specific time, so we can insert them together to be more fair with members

what do u think of inserting them at 1:00 am today ?a

or at 2:00 pm tomorrow after aljuma'a prayer

it's up to u

btw , don't forget to put the mark out of 20 for every girl

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious English boy about the marks let's set a date and a specific time, so we can insert them together to be more fair with members what do u think of inserting them at 1:00 am today ?a or at 2:00 pm tomorrow after aljuma'a prayer it's up to u btw , don't forget to put the mark out of 20 for every girl

seems I can't manage to meet at the same time!! I added my comments & results
u add urs then we can announce the winner

[MS.Fabulous]

back
thank you soooo much con and english boy
really i learned a lot from my mistakes
con
about your question
you said that i should n't start with a dialogue
we studied in our book something called
a hook in the intro
it is the most important thing in the essay
and our teacher made us practice in it a loooot
if you don't write a good hook you will lose a lot of marks
this is the definition for the hook
A hook is a sentence or group of sentences or a phrase in the introduction that "hooks" or draws the reader in. Basically it can be a question,quotation,statistics and a scenario like i did
^_*
and writing a short essay it is a habit and my teacher always says that
i write super fast in the exsams because of the time
and this essay i wrote it fast because of the time also i was extremely busy yesterday
i will work hard on your notes guys and i hope i will n't do these mistakes again
well done teachers

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة MS.Fabulous back thank you soooo much con and english boy really i learned a lot from my mistakes con about your question you said that i should n't start with a dialogue we studied in our book something called a hook in the intro it is the most important thing in the essay and our teacher made us practice in it a loooot if you don't write a good hook you will lose a lot of marks this is the definition for the hook A hook is a sentence or group of sentences or a phrase in the introduction that "hooks" or draws the reader in. Basically it can be a question,quotation,statistics and a scenario like i did ^_* and writing a short essay it is a habit and my teacher always says that i write super fast in the exsams because of the time and this essay i wrote it fast because of the time also i was extremely busy yesterday i will work hard on your notes guys and i hope i will n't do these mistakes again well done teachers

Miss Fabulous i didn't say u shouldn't

be careful and go back to my speech

i said i'm sure if u can start with conversation coz it's new thing for me

right ?a

make sure that i'll always say something that i'm sure about i'll not correct things in a moody way

if i'm not sure about something i'll say u should or shouldn't

if i'm not i'll say i'm not sure

thanx Miss hope to back and see again