::: دروس خصوصية منهجية لمادة Writing 2 Lane-216 :::

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم
السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

اهلاً بالجميــع ..
اتوقّع الكل داخل الموضوع يحسب اني بقدّم شكوى او اشكي احدهم

لا

بالعكس

في البداية ...

كل طالب او طالبة اخفقت في هذه المادة
اعلم مدى الحسرة والقهر على ترم كامل من الواجبات والكتابه ولكن ..
هل نستسلم للشيطان الذي يريد من اليأس ان يتسلل الى قلوبنا
وان نعلّق اخطائنا على الاخرين.. ونستمر بالدعاء أوالغيبة
وايضاً ان نفقد الايمان بالقدر ونندب حظوظنا

لاااا ابداً .. اعوذ بالله من الشيطان الرجيم

سؤال بسيط ..

هـــل يفيــد البـكـاء على اللبن المسكوب ؟؟!!

فكّرت بالاجابة ..


حسنــا


ماذا وجدت


اكييد ان البكاء لن يرجع اللبن المسكوب ولن يصلح الاناء المكسور

طيب مالعمل



حادثة اللبن المسكوب .. والاناء المكسور

تعلمنا
ان
في المرة القادمة
نصنع اناء غير قابل للكسر ..

اذاً تعلمنــا ان نحسّــن من عملنا الحالي



لذا وبهذا الموضوع نريد عمل تجمع يستفيد منه الجميع من ناحية الكتابة




نصائح ومواقع وطرق لتحسين الكتابة

بالنسبة لي
سأبدأ ان شاء الله بفكرة الاخ الاسد في موضوعه
وهو ان نعيد كتابة المقالات الانجليزية
بهذا نتعلم الطرق الصحيح للكتابة .. وايضا تزيد معلوماتنا العامه

فكل من يجد مقال ممتاز وفكرته مناسبة
ينسخه لنا هنا في هذا الموضوع .. وبهذا تكون لدينا مجموعة مقالات متنوعه وبمواضيع مختلفه

وايضاً طرح (Topics) مختلفة للكتابة عنها
وليس ضروريا ان تنشر هنا ما كتبته فالغرض هو الفائدة
فلو اعدنا كتابة المقالات خطيا
واخذنا الـTopic المقترح وحاولنا الكتابه فيه
فبإذن الله نستفيد

وايضاً اقتراحاتكم من خبراتكم وغيركم
عن تحسين هذه المادة

وووبس

ياليت الفكره تعجبكم ويكون فيه تفاعل
لانها جات بعد فترة احباط الأغلبية مرّوا بهـا

وفي النهايــة :
"Life indeed would be dull if there were no such difficulties"

JS

[مملكة عمري]

It's a great idea my dear

[شذى الوادي]

It is wonderful idea this is what I want for long time, actually I thought about a competition for writing
Listen to me every day we can think about some topic and write about it also we can vote to the best paragraph.
If anyone agree just let me know by send (I agree to be one of the participants)………
I will send the rules of the competition if many students agree and we will start soon in shaa Allah .
Best wishes

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

Hello dears,
nice to see your fast replies that made me happy and enthusiastic to complete working on writing and improving it.
so, please be with me at the last untill we find ourselves satisfied about our writing, and do not leave our working in this thread half done.


Mammlakat Omri,
thanks your coming

Shatha Alwadi,
I like your idea, but right now excuse me I will be only a spectator and voter.

attention,

please.. all the replies should be in English. Do not be shy of making mistakes, for it is one of learning methods. Let us try and learn of our mistakes.

I will inshaa Allah begin the first lesson in the next reply, and I hope we support each other and work together.


JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Before I start, here is a good that sent by Mamlakat Omri
it is about the parts of the good essay

here it is

First Lesson

Writing Effective Comparison or Contrast Essays

A Comparison or Contrast essay is an essay in which you either compare something or contrast something.

A comparison essay is an essay in which you emphasize the similarities, and a contrast essay is an essay in which you emphasize the differences.


We use comparison and contrast thinking when deciding which university to attend, which car to buy, or whether to drive a car or take a bus or an airplane to a vacation site.

In this section, two classic organizational patterns of a comparison or contrast essay will be discussed. One is called block arrangement of ideas; the other is called point-by-point or alternating arrangement of ideas.

Suppose you are interested in showing the differences between vacationing in the mountains and vacationing at the beach

To be continuous.....

JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

One way to arrange your material is to use the block arrangement which is to write about vacationing in the mountains in one paragraph and vacationing at the beach in the next. If you mention a particular point in the mountains paragraph, you must mention the same point in the beach paragraph, and in the same order. Study the following outline, which shows this kind of organization. The introductory paragraph is followed by the mountains paragraph, the beach paragraph, then the conclusion; the fully developed essay is just four paragraphs.

Block Arrangement (four paragraphs)

I.Introduction in which you state your purpose which is to discuss the differences between vacationing in the mountains or at the beach

II.Mountain
A. Climate
B. Types of Activities
C. Location


III.Beach
A. Climate
B. Types of Activities
C. Location


IV.Conclusion

A second way to organize this material is to discuss a particular point about vacationing in the mountains and then immediately to discuss the same point about vacationing at the beach. This is called point-by-point or alternating arrangement. An outline of this organization follows.

Point-by-Point or Alternating Arrangement (five paragraphs)

I.Introduction in which you state your purpose which is to discuss differences between vacationing in the mountains or at the beach

II.First difference between mountains and beaches is climate
A. Mountains
B. Beach

III.Second difference between mountains and beaches are types of activities
A. Mountains
B. Beach

IV.Third difference between mountains and beaches is the location
A. Mountains
B. Beach


V.Conclusion

O.k Dears, now what do you suggest

to see the essays of those outlines
or
to complete those outlines by our writing??

JS

[سرحان]

نعم هذا هو الكلام الصحيح وسوف ازودكم ببعض الروابط والمواضيع المفيدة
والمتعلقة بمواد الكتابة ان شاء الله

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

hello Sarhan

Thanks a lot

we're waiting, so don't be late please

JS

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Hi dears

Because nobody answered my Qs, I prefer to copy the essays of those outlines


First

Block Arrangent

Vacationing at the Beach or in the Mountains People are always looking forward to their vacation period. There are many options where to choose. I think that the two most common places people choose for taking a vacation are the beaches and the mountains. Both places offer a variety of fun activities. The beach offers activities that the mountain cannot offer and vice versa. The mountain and the beach are totally different. The purpose of this essay is to contrast the climate, types of activities and locations of beaches and mountains. I’m going to discuss mountains first. The three aspects I’m going to discuss are climate, types of activities and location. Climate is always important in order to enjoy vacations. If a person dislikes cold weather, he or she might have a hard time in the mountains. The cold climate in the mountains is the first barrier to enjoying them, but the climate and the temperature of these zones also determine the types of activities they offer. Snow boarding, mountain climbing, mountain biking, hiking, and skiing are some activities people can enjoy when going to the mountains. There are many regions that have mountains where people can go and have a great vacation. Canada is a country located in North America and contains many mountain vacation sites where people can go and have fun. I’m going to discuss the beach second. The three aspects I’m going to discuss are climate, types of activities and location. Warm climate is one of the most important features that the beach has. Sun and fun are two words that describe the beach. The temperature in those places is always hot. The sea and the warm climate determine the activities that are available at the beach. People can swim, play volleyball, play soccer, and ride water bikes. In most coastal sites, there are discos and restaurants where people can dance or party throughout the night. Mexico offers many amazing coastal sites to visit. Acapulco and Cancun are two of the most beautiful and famous beaches in the word. It doesn’t matter what place a person decides to choose. The fun is 100% guaranteed. People often choose one of these two options to spend their vacations. Depending on what the person likes is what he or she will choose. I like the beach better than the mountains, but sometimes it is better to take a risk and try a different place to enjoy.

Is the essay above organized using block or point-by-point arrangement of details? Note first the essay is four paragraphs, (1) an introduction, (2) a paragraph about vacationing in the mountains, (3) a paragraph about vacationing at the beach, and (4) a conclusion. This is the block arrangement, the first block containing information about mountains and the second block containing information about the beach.

I think we understood the meaning of Block Arrangement

Now, take a paper and copy that model two times

Best wishes

Js

[Jasmine Al-Qahtani]

بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

Second

The other method which is

Point by Point Organization

Consuming Fresh Foods Instead of Canned Foods Eating is an activity that we as humans do at least two times a day. We live in a world where the variety of food is immense, and we are responsible for what we eat. We decide what we are about to eat and how it will affect our bodies. The purpose of this essay is to compare and contrast the differences between eating fresh foods instead of canned foods. The three main differences are flavor, health benefits, and cost. The most notable difference between these two kinds of foods is their flavor. Fresh foods have great flavor and taste because they keep all their natural conditions. Canned foods however, lack a lot of its flavor characteristics because there are some other chemical products added to the natural foods. It is logical that the fresh foods will have a greater taste and flavor when consumed just because of the time in which they have been prepared. Comparing both types of foods we notice another difference. There is a health factor that affects both of them. Canned foods lose some of the original fresh food nutrients when stored, and also it has to be tinned with many conservatives and chemical factors that prolong the f life and apparent freshness of the food but could also become toxic if consumed too often. Yet another difference between these two types of foods is the cost. Canned foods are much more expensive than fresh foods. Here the benefit of buying tinned foods is that they are easier to find, for example, in a supermarket instead of the market like the fresh foods, and they require less work to prepare than fresh foods, just open and serve. Here are the main three differences between buying fresh foods and buying canned foods. As we can see it comes down to a personal choice, based on the time each person has, the money and the importance he/she gives to his/her nutrition and health. Therefore it is important that you consider your possibilities and choose the best type of foods for your convenience and lifestyle.

The essay above is the "classic" five paragraph essay that all non-native speakers of English should learn to write. This essays also contains the "classic" point-by-point organization, each point stated and developed in a single paragraph. The essay contains five paragraphs that contrast three differences between fresh and canned foods. The essay includes (1) an introduction, (2) the development of the first difference (flavor), (3) the development of the second difference (health benefits), (4) the development of the third difference (cost), and (5) a conclusion. In the true classic tradition, the three main differences in this contrast essay—flavor, health benefits, and cost—are stated both in the introduction and the conclusion as well.

The method above is the one we suppose to write in our course Lane216

so, read the model and rewrite it

JS