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[_OCTOBER]

oh shoot!!

tell me you did not take that replay seriously :)
I was just being supportive and I had no intention of doing it in a formal fashion !!
since it was not a paragraph , but it was just a replay !!!

you can obviously see the gimmick nature of the whole replay
and the personal slang in words like " muchly" , or the play on The word in " grammatically horrible"
which it is not about the word " wrong " personified nor the precise about the concept
but it's more about the different "linguistics" background , thus , it is a different endings depending
on how they are used in a sentence ...and I would arguably go and say there is no preventative
or directive action about it as long as we not going to elevate them up to the level of
academic " impersonal BO HO style " Language ..... or at least that's what I thought " !!

Third, you should use 'annoying' not 'annoyed,' because annoying means: مزعج, while 'annoyed' is the past tense of 'annoy'.

yeah the oldest mistake in the book
always got me

Finally, 'muchly' is not even a word.

well , technically it is
but it is very rare that you would think it more of a slang
ask a teacher about it

although I do reading and English - speaking- sometimes

hhh
that was just me being sarcastic
and having fun with words
my bad

I could simply say
I read and speak English more often
but still bad at grammars
and then I'll die right after that
for being brutally boring

[LeLou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة _OCTOBER oh shoot!! tell me you did not take that replay seriously :) I was just being supportive and I had no intention of doing it in a formal fashion !! since it was not a paragraph , but it was just a replay !!! you can obviously see the gimmick nature of the whole replay and the personal slang in words like " muchly" , or the play on The word in " grammatically horrible" which it is not about the word " wrong " personified nor the precise about the concept but it's more about the different "linguistics" background , thus , it is a different endings depending on how they are used in a sentence ...and I would arguably go and say there is no preventative or directive action about it as long as we not going to elevate them up to the level of academic " impersonal BO HO style " Language ..... or at least that's what I thought " !! yeah the oldest mistake in the book always got me well , technically it is but it is very rare that you would think it more of a slang ask a teacher about it hhh that was just me being sarcastic and having fun with words my bad I could simply say I read and speak English more often but still bad at grammars and then I'll die right after that for being brutally boring

Of course I didn't take the post seriously :)
If I were serious, then I would have corrected every and each single line. Mark that the first two lines were not corrected.
I just corrected some errors not all of them.
For me, I'm going to correct almost everything that will be written here, even if it's just a reply.
You don't have to provide a formal piece of writing, anything that has been written should be corrected.
Even informal writing should have a degree of accuracy.

Using slang does not mean using rare words or saying sentences in a way that makes people close their eyes and lean their heads.
We use slang while speaking Arabic but we don't speak like non native speakers do (e.g. the way Indian people do).

Please don't take it personally, but you should show some degree of accuracy in your writing.
Messing with some words, punctuation marks, or using slang is acceptable but putting words out of their place or using past tense when speaking about the present is completely unacceptable.
I don't think that we do that even while using our native language.

And I don't think that this will make you boring nor the way you speak is making your speaking interesting.
And I'm giving you a break by not correcting your reply, which contains even spelling errors :)


I'm not trying to be superior, but I believe that the hard way is the best way of learning.
And feel free to correct any mistake in my posts, after all, making mistakes is in the nature of human beings.


Thanks for your support and I hope you find my tips useful.

[brincessa reem]

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it is a greet a idea i hope dont mistake

[LeLou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة brincessa reem .. it is a greet a idea i hope dont mistake

I hope I don't make mistakes

or

I hope I don't make any mistake

//

[LeLou]

anything that has been written should be corrected

will be written

[maro abdulwahab]

so do i have any mistakes in my replay up there : / ?

[LeLou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maro abdulwahab so do i have any mistakes in my replay up there : / ?

Yes, you have mistakes even in this one.
:$

'Reply'
Replay means play again

The pronoun (I) must be capitalized.

The first letter of a sentence also has to be capitalized.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maro abdulwahab actually its a great idea to begin with . in my point of view its a good start to correct your spelling mistakes in the english language , and i hope that every one will be active with it so we can learn from each other :)

Again, the first letter of a sentence has to be capitalized.
The pronoun 'I' has to be capitalized anywhere in a sentence.

There was no need for that period and saying 'from my point of view' is more correct.
Never add a space before periods, question marks, exclamation marks, and commas.

'our' not 'your'

The first letter of 'English' has to be capitalized.

There was no need for that comma or you could have used a period, omitted 'and,' and started a new sentence.

'everyone' not 'every one'

You can say only 'active' or you can say 'active in this post'

[الــــدب]

Sometimes I have nothing to do. I think about taking a walk in the entire city, once a week. I like to walk alone, thinking about many things. There is nothing to write about. I just express my thoughts by writing it here, cause I want to improve my writing.

[LeLou]

^
^

That's a good step and I will check your writing later..

//

Okay I will give you all a theme to write about every week..
The theme is of this week is: winter.

You don't have to write about winter, you can write anything that is winter-related.
e.g. something happened to you in winter, an important person to you who was born in winter, your mood in winter, what you like or hate about winter, something that winter reminds you of, etc.

Even writing about a plant or fruit that grows in winter is acceptable.


Even one sentence is acceptable.

Good luck :)

[الــــدب]

Every thing in winter seems quiet, as I said in some of my poetry: I left you quietly without a word as quiet as winter nights. Although, there is one thing I hate about winter, the training in cold weather is so hard and painful.