تعبير انجليزي مستوى 3

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my Worst day happened when I was young . I traveled with my family to Egypt in the summer vacation and we spent 3 weeks there

One day we decided to go to the pyramids, and I was surprised to see them

When I was in line to explore the place i turned back for a moment and i did not see my parents

I was very scared and I was crying, then the policeman came to me and asked me about my

name and then he took me to one of the officials in his office, he asked me my name and our phone

number, I told him and then he called my parents and they came to me and they were very afraid and scared

Then we went to the hotel and slept . the next day we came back to Jeddah, it Was the worst day of my life

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