213 ياااا مسلمين..

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السلااام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركااته .........

ياا اخوااان الله يجزاااكم خيررر ......
213 الكتابة .......ثالث مرره معي ((عنااااد))
اللي ناازله له وحضر دورتهااا واللي عنده معلوماات عنهاااا يسااعدني الله لااا يهينكم .

[JASSAR]

ادرسها مع مدرس فاهم المادة


.. انت في المستوى التاسع؟؟ غريبة!

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هاذي لخصتها بنفسي ماني متاكده من كل اللي فيها بس اذا شايفين فيها غلط او حاجه ساعدوني وانتا ان شا الله تستفيد منها

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Chapter one about academic life around the world
In this chapter i have to write about a classmate
Genre focus :deive

Important rules
The different between fact and opinion
Using the diagram to organizing information
Topic sentences how to write it
Connecting ideas by and ,also ,but and so
About first draft strategy
The ordering information in the paragraph can be organize by starting with fact then write the opinion
Revising for content ( I have to revise my paragraph 2 times first time for content and the second time for form )

Nada, my classmate
Nada Ahamad is my close classmate .we have known each other from 2 years ago. She is 21 years and from Jeddah. She is 1.70 high and 57 kilos. She is honest, helpful and caring. Her father is English teacher. She is living in the 70th street with her family. She is studying to be English teacher .Nada likes me and I like her. Her hobbies are sewing, reading short story and using a computer. She also likes to watch TV talk show programs, but she doesn’t like kabsa .

مع العلم ان القطع الموجوده اخذتها من ملخص ادتني اياه احدى البنات كنماذج وبالنسبه للرولز تقدر ترجع للكتاب عشان تعرف ايش مضمونها

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Chapter 2 experiencing nature

The subject today

How to describe painting

• In this chapter I have to write a deive paragraph about painting
  • First I have to start with the name of painting and by who is painted it and if it a real thing or not
  • then describe the general atmosphere
  • Put the details starting with close things then the far things(moving from the general to the specific information )
  Nouns
  Adjectives
  Verbs
  Background
  Afraid
  Attack
  Harbor
  Dark
  Hold
  Oar
  Dramatic
  Kill
  Rope
  Frightening
  Reach
  Rowboat
  Huge
  Rescue
  Shark
  real
  Try
  Ship
  Sharp
  Wearing
  Spear
  Dangerous
  catching
  Teeth
  Warm
  Lying
  park
  Sunny
  dancing
  
  How to use adjectives to write about details
  • After verbs such as be ,seem, look, feel and get :
  • The men are young
  • The men look horrified
  • The boy feels terrified
  • The shark is getting hungry
  • Before noun
  • The young men are getting in a tiny boat
  Using prepositional phrases to write about details
  Prepositional words as (on ,near far)+noun(the table )
  
  Above
  In
  Next to
  At
  In front of
  On
  Behind
  In the middle
  Under
  Beside
  Near
  Out of
  
  I have to use present continuous
  Spelling rules for adding (ing )
  Using articles: a , an and the

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chapter 3 Eating to Live or Living to Eat



Genre focus : deive

Subject :deive paragraph about holiday food

· How to write about holyday food
· I start with holyday name and why we celebrate of it and that is The topic sentences most be general statement e.g.(Eid Alfitr is a family celebration to make the end of Ramadan.
· I have to be more specific than the topic sentences e.g. (Muslims eat many traditional foods on Eid Alfitr)
· Then I write the details e.g. ( some typical Eid Alfitr foods are Kabsa ( rice ,chicken and vegetables) ,Tharyd ( meat and potato stew ) and biscuits .
· I end with my Personal opinion or my idea about that e.g. people eat more than usual on Eid Alfitr, but they feel full and happy.

1. Count and non count nouns rules
2. How to use appositives : in writing about food , I have to explain what some dishes
. And I can use appositive to do this effectively e.g. in page 50
3. How I can use commas in lists

Adjectives I can use it to describe food:
Good!/ Great!/ Delicious!
flavor, including good, delicious, tasty, yummy, pleasant-tasting, scrumptious, delectable, etc....

Mthlotha
Mthlotha the special dish for Eid Al-fiter which comes at the end of Ramdan, there is a big celebration called Eid Al-fiter. Muslims all over the world celebrate this holiday. Families ever where enjoy themselves with friends and relatives. They eat and drink more than usual in that festival.
Mthlotha, especially dish in Riyadh region, is a popular dish with rice, bread and meat. People usually have drinks beside this great dish such as tea or soft drinks (cola, Pepsi, 7 up)
After eating Mthlotha you will feel good, I have tried it myself. It’s really good dish.

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شك شك .......يعطيك الف عاافيه على اهتمااامك ...
واتمنى من الاخواان اللي حضرواا دوورات يفيدوونااا ......

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Chapter 4 Letter

11/جمادى الأولى/1430

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Genre focus : information

Organizing paragraphs in a letter :

First paragraph will say hello to friend discuss the visit and describe some activities

The Second paragraph will give directions to home

The last paragraph will have one or 2 sentences to saying bye and end the letter

When I want to give direction it's will be as step -by - step to follow it's help to be more clearly

Choosing the correct verb tens

I have to forms simple present (for rotten things )

And future with be going to ( for something I'm going to do or plan to do it )

Using the preposition ( in - at-behind - on - to- onto- down -for )

Using there , it and they

On the letter I start with date it must be in the upper of the letter I write month first with capital it then day and comma after it and I end with year by number e.g. April 12 , 2007

Salutation is usual on the begging of letter e.g. dear what ever then I put comma

(dear mom ,)

then we move to the body of this letter and write what I want with out sentences topic

Then I closing the paragraph with usual one sentence e.g. best wishes

Letter

Jan 14, 2009

Dear Mona,

I'm really happy to write to you, and I hope you and your family are well. actually I'm so exciting that you are going to visit me in the next weekend. We are going to have great time with each other. I made plan to spend time in holiday, on Thursday afternoon we going to the mall for shopping, and then we can have dinner at the near restaurant from my home. In Friday if you want, we can go to the spa right near the mall there many things to do and you can have a wonderful time. It's easy to find my home. I live in 60th street. You can come to my house through King Fahd Road. You will see a fast food restaurant on your left. Turn left on to the 60th street, until you come to a mosque. Next to it, there is a girls' school. My house is on the other side of the road.

See you in week end

Your friend,

[لقيت روحي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة شك شك مع العلم ان القطع الموجوده اخذتها من ملخص ادتني اياه احدى البنات كنماذج وبالنسبه للرولز تقدر ترجع للكتاب عشان تعرف ايش مضمونها

هلا اخووي ..

طيب ممكن تحط الملخص للأفادة ..؟؟

[العنابي]

شكرا لك ولمجهودك العظيم اخي الكريم واتمنى التفاعل من الاخوان اللي خارج جدة ولا يستطيعون الحضور بالمشاركة ولو بكلمة حلوة شكرا مرة ثانية لك اخي شك شك
وفالك التوفيق إن شاء الله