~|| Let's check our writings :: لــنصــحـح كــتــاباتـنـــا ||~

[LeLou]

’*, بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم.. السلام عليكم و رحمة الله و بركاته.. زوار الأكـاديمية الكرام.. أسعد الله أوقاتكم بكل خير.. هذا الموضوع هو عبارة عن مساحة حرة لجميع الأعضاء لطرح كتاباتهم سواء كانت جملة أو قطعة أو حتى مقال.. و من ثم مناقشة الأخطاء اللغوية (إملائية و نحوية) من قبل الأعضاء.. لنفيد و نستفيد.. أي كتابة مرحب بها و إن كانت جملة واحدة.. دمتم بود||~ ’*, In the name of Allah the Most Gracious & Most Merciful. Dear visitors of English Language Academy: I hope you all are doing well. This thread is a free space for everyone to post their writings. And then discuss the spelling and grammatical mistakes in each posted piece of writing. Any piece of writing is acceptable and welcomed whether it was a sentence, a paragraph, or an essay. So that we all can learn and help each other. Have fun =) ’*, REMEMBER: 3/ لم نولد نــآطقين باللغة الإنجليزية فهي ليست لغتنــآ الأم.. كلنــآ تعلمنـآ شيئًا فشيئًا و أمامنـآ الكثير لنتعلمه، لذلك من غير الائق السخرية من أخطـــآء الآخرين اللغوية.. و لا بأس بالتوجيه البنــــآء،، فالقسم أنشئ بغرض التعلم :) ’*,

[الــــدب]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

It's splendid idea it will help us to improve our writing.

thank you LeLou

[الــــدب]

It's splendid idea
or
It's a splendid idea

??

[باذنجانه]

a wonderful subject that is what i was need to improve my writing and see where i got mistakes

[باذنجانه]

This is just a suggestion . give us any theme and we will express about it

[lo0ola.h]

وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته













That`s a good idea...

I will be with you in this when i retune home from China"if god wish"

[الــــدب]

I trained hard today, I barely move right now. I want to sleep but I can't until finish of Isha prayer.

[_OCTOBER]

yeah let's do that :))))
Misspellings is guaranteed for sure
____ I myself fit the D.e.s.c.r.i.p.t.i.o.n tightly
although I do reading and English - speaking- sometimes
,but still grammatically horrible
and I consistently mess up annoyed little details in spelling ..
not to mention the misuse of the symbols in paragraph along with the capital letters
which makes the whole thing more painful

Anyway
l'll stop by , whenever I feel the need to be checked
or when to provide wrong information to other
either-way , thank you muchly for yet to come

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[LeLou]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الــــدب It's splendid idea or It's a splendid idea ??

It's a splendid idea =)
You're welcome.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة باذنجانه a wonderful subject that is what i was need to improve my writing and see where i got mistakes

It should be written this way: what I need.


The pronoun (I) should be capitalized even in the middle of a sentence.


Also, "where I make mistakes" is more accurate; even though saying, "and correct my mistakes," or, "and know my mistakes," is even
more acceptable.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة باذنجانه This is just a suggestion . give us any theme and we will express about it

You should use a colon (:) rather than a period; and don't add a space before the punctuation mark.
You should've learned that during the "English for Beginners" course.

=)

Also, 'write' is more accurate than 'express', since express means: convey a thought or feeling by words or gestures.

Anyway, I will consider your suggestion.
Thank you.
:)

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة lo0ola.h وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته That`s a good idea... I will be with you in this when i retune home from China"if god wish"

A spelling error: retune should be written this way: return.

Again, the pronoun (I) has to be capitalized any where in a sentence.

if god will not wish; and you should use parentheses instead of quotation marks.

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الــــدب I trained hard today, I barely move right now. I want to sleep but I can't until finish of Isha prayer.

I can barely move

::

until I finish Al-Ishaa prayer
or:
until I perform Al-Ishaa prayer

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة _OCTOBER yeah let's do that :)))) Misspellings is guaranteed for sure ____ I myself fit the D.e.s.c.r.i.p.t.i.o.n tightly although I do reading and English - speaking- sometimes ,but still grammatically horrible and I consistently mess up annoyed little details in spelling .. not to mention the misuse of the symbols in paragraph along with the capital letters which makes the whole thing more painful Anyway l'll stop by , whenever I feel the need to be checked or when to provide wrong information to other either-way , thank you muchly for yet to come . . .

Well, well.
You did pretty well writing the above paragraph but your greatest problem is the misuse of words not the grammatical mistakes.

First, "I do reading and English," can you express the previous phrase in Arabic so I can help you write it again right?

Second, you should say 'but still horrible at grammars' since the phrase you wrote means:
لكني أظل فظيع نحويًا..
في حين كان لازم تقول: لكني فظيع في القواعد =)

Third, you should use 'annoying' not 'annoyed,' because annoying means:
مزعج,
while 'annoyed' is the past tense of 'annoy'.

Fourth, by 'the symbols' do you mean punctuation marks?

Fifth, 'provide wrong information' means:
أقدم معلومات خاطئة!
And I hope that is not what you intend to do.
You should say: 'correct others' wrong information'.

Finally, 'muchly' is not even a word.
you should say: so much or very much.
+
'For yet to come' again, can you express the previous phrase in Arabic?

[maro abdulwahab]

actually its a great idea to begin with . in my point of view

its a good start to correct your spelling mistakes in the english language , and i hope

that every one will be active with it so we can learn from each other :)