ممكن تصححولي البلقراف

[جود الجوري]

ممكن تصححولي اياه من الاخطاء يعني القرمر


Mobile phone

There are advantages and disadvantages to using mobile phone . one advantage is that it is convenient for example you can be used anywhere . another advantage is that it is time saver for example if you need any person just call in his number .one disadvantage of mobile phone is that it is addicted for example someone can not stop using it .another disadvantage is that it is roudly way for example use mobile in a public place.

[HHM]

cell phones

There are many advantages and disadvantages of using a cell phone.o
One of the main advantages is that it's a lot more convenient you can use it anywhere , it saves alot of time
and of course you can reach any one just by dialing his number.

However,the cell phone has some disadvantages as well it can turn into an addiction by not stop using it
and it's also rude to talk on a cell phone in public places.

عدلت الجمل ^__^
طبعاً موبايل فون صح بس الدارج السل فون
ان شاءالله اكون افدتك

[السعيد 2009]

انا عندي ملاحظات ويمكن تطلع خطا
Mobile phone

There are advantages and disadvantages to using mobile phone . one advantage is that it is convenient for example you can be used anywhere . another advantage is that it is time saver for example if you need any person just call in his number .one disadvantage of mobile phone is that it is addicted for example someone can not stop using it .another disadvantage is that it is roudly way for example use mobile in a public place. احس انه مقطعين منسوخة هذا رايي ويمكن اكون غلطان

[السعيد 2009]

يااخت HHM
his main advantages
وش رايك في الجملة هذي اعتقد انها خطا
وقاعدة HOWEVR
امامها نقطة وبعدها فاصله ويمكن اكون غلطان

[HHM]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة السعيد 2009 يااخت HHM his main advantages وش رايك في الجملة هذي اعتقد انها خطا وقاعدة HOWEVR امامها نقطة وبعدها فاصله ويمكن اكون غلطان

تم تصحيح الاولى بدلتها بـ the
ثانيا هاوافر لها استخدامات كثيرهـ
ومن الاستخدامات هذي
" if "however" is used to begin a sentence ,it must be followed by a comma and what appears after the comma must be a complete sentence "

^__^

[لزيزا]

There are many advantages and disadvantages of using cell phones.
One of the many advantages; is that it is a lot more convenient .you can use it anywhere. It saves a lot of time and of course, you can reach any one just by dialing his number.

On the other hand, cell phones have some disadvantages too. Using it non-stopping can turn into an addiction; in addition, it is considered rude to talk on a cell phone in public places

[HHM]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة لزيزا There are many advantages and disadvantages of using cell phones. One of the many advantages; is that it is a lot more convenient .you can use it anywhere. It saves a lot of time and of course, you can reach any one just by dialing his number. On the other hand, cell phones have some disadvantages too. Using it non-stopping can turn into an addiction; in addition, it is considered rude to talk on a cell phone in public places

| non-stop using it |
+
main & however
برضو تنفع ^__*

[لزيزا]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة HHM | non-stop using it | + main & however برضو تنفع ^__*

non-stop using it

مم لا يا عسل الترتيب غلط بس المعنى صحيح

main

هي صح 100% بس مو شرط كل الناس يعتبروا انه دي الاشياء هي الاساس

however

برضو 100% صح بس ماهي بقوة on the other hand في المقارنه

بس هي صح و اكيد الفرق بين كل واحد في طريقة التعبير تلعب دور

[تميمي عسل]

There are many advantages and disadvantages of using a cell phone.o
يااحلى اعضاء ماتحسون أن الجمله هذي فيها خطأ !!!!
يعني المفروض تكون كذا
There are many of advantages and disadvantages of using a cell phone.o

انا مادري شاك في الجمله يمكن يفيدنا اخونا بوليمر ... اهو عنده الخبر اليقين

[HHM]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة تميمي عسل there are many advantages and disadvantages of using a cell phone.o يااحلى اعضاء ماتحسون أن الجمله هذي فيها خطأ !!!! يعني المفروض تكون كذا there are many of advantages and disadvantages of using a cell phone.o انا مادري شاك في الجمله يمكن يفيدنا اخونا بوليمر ... اهو عنده الخبر اليقين

لا الجمله صح 100%