Hi Raghodda
wow great =) you have good background in English *_^ Super baby
okay I'll tell you about your mistak most of it concentrate on your spelling I checked it with red color
Best wishes 
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You have good...etc ...= you have a good....etc
I will tell you about your mistak...etc = I'll tell you about your
mistakes, most of them
Most of it concentrate ...etc = so I will concentrate on..etc
