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قديم 14-07-2011, 02:46 AM   #77

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تاريخ التسجيل: May 2009
كلية: كلية الآداب والعلوم الانسانية
التخصص: انقلش
نوع الدراسة: متخرج - انتساب
المستوى: متخرج
البلد: جــــدة
الجنس: أنثى
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افتراضي رد: the (perfect essay writing) competition

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look at how they wrote the essay

Vacationing at the Beach or in the Mountains

People are always looking forward to their vacation period. There are many options where to choose. I think that the two most common places people choose for taking a vacation are the beaches and the mountains. Both places offer a variety of fun activities. The beach offers activities that the mountain cannot offer and vice versa. The mountain and the beach are totally different. The purpose of this essay is to contrast the climate, types of activities and locations of beaches and mountains.
I’m going to discuss mountains first. The three aspects I’m going to discuss are climate, types of activities and location. Climate is always important in order to enjoy vacations. If a person dislikes cold weather, he or she might have a hard time in the mountains. The cold climate in the mountains is the first barrier to enjoying them, but the climate and the temperature of these zones also determine the types of activities they offer. Snow boarding, mountain climbing, mountain biking, hiking, and skiing are some activities people can enjoy when going to the mountains. There are many regions that have mountains where people can go and have a great vacation. Canada is a country located in North America and contains many mountain vacation sites where people can go and have fun.

I’m going to discuss the beach second. The three aspects I’m going to discuss are climate, types of activities and location. Warm climate is one of the most important features that the beach has. Sun and fun are two words that describe the beach. The temperature in those places is always hot. The sea and the warm climate determine the activities that are available at the beach. People can swim, play volleyball, play soccer, and ride water bikes. In most coastal sites, there are discos and restaurants where people can dance or party throughout the night. Mexico offers many amazing coastal sites to visit. Acapulco and Cancun are two of the most beautiful and famous beaches in the word.

It doesn’t matter what place a person decides to choose. The fun is 100% guaranteed. People often choose one of these two options to spend their vacations. Depending on what the person likes is what he or she will choose. I like the beach better than the mountains, but sometimes it is better to take a risk and try a different place to enjoy. a


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dear con i'm really very thankful for ur explanation for this type of essay

but actually I'm so familiar in this type of essay and i did the same steps that u mentioned above , i mean i have some mistakes in some sentences structure as English boy corrected , yet i did a comparison essay NOT free writing

and i did the way of point by point ,which i talked about family climate in Ramadan ,and then in the other months and so i did in the other body paragraphs

as belong to why i chose Ramadan and other months with out determine the months that i want to compare with , is because u guys were not exact with ur topics that u offered for us , and because i can't mention one month to compare with Ramadan cuz many months are the same in their aspects and the only months that different is Ramadan and thu alhijah, which i don't see any way to compare with the two of them



i'm not perfect in writing and i like to be not perfect to learn and learn more from my mistakes , it does n't matter if i lose or win , as for as i'm learning and get benefit , i liked ur competition and its really motivate us to be much better in writing and this precious opportunity was given from u guys ,con, miss ,and English boy so thank u all and please stay this way and lets continue our way in English


 

 



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