[English boy]

Malak

you should be aware of the following:

punctuation mark
find it online and be well-known of using each in the right place

repeating statements
u mentioned the same sentences several times . at least try to avoid using the same words, find synonyms, and paraphrase them

simple grammar errors
capital letters, articles, shaping

I give it = 16 out of 20

[COLOR="rgb(139, 0, 0)"]Suzi[/COLOR]

urs is not much different from Malak:


simple grammar errors
capital letters, articles, shaping

be selective with proper words

try while writing in English not think in Arabic then u translate!! this may confuses u

15 out 20


Fabulous

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urs is quiet good but it has no sense of benefit

I mean only one paragraph is not quiet enough for argument !! u can do much better
rare mistakes but only one peace of info was mentioned in ur essay

only 9 out 20

[COLOR="rgb(139, 0, 0)"]Ragggad[/COLOR]

I have to be honest.. I really really was impressed of urs..

very good shaping, well-organized, only non-mentioned and rare mistakes

well done Raggad, I really liked what've done

this deserves 19 out of 20