Advantages and Disadvantages of TV
In this paragraph I will tell you about the most important advantages and disadvantages of TV.
We all agree that TV is one of the most important sources communication these days . So, we must learn about the most important .advantages and disadvantages of TV
هذي الجملة إحذفيها أو بدليها لأنه مايصير تقولين في البراقراف التالي بتكلم عن،، غيرها مثلاً سنتطرق إلى.
فيه كثير من الأساليب الحلوة اللي بتطور كتابتك راح تدرسينها في مواد كتابة 1 و2
ومنها إنك تبدئئ البراقراف بسؤال أو إقتباس أو جُملة تعجب أو معلومة غريبة تجذب القارئ،، مثلاً
Have you ever thought about the advantages and the disadvantages of watching TV's programs?
we can watch to a lot of events that happening around the world.
Secondly, we can learn a lot of manners and traditional things for many countries. Thirdly, TV has a lot of education
al programs. So, we can use TV to learn anything like cooking.
TV also has a lot of disadvantages first of all, sitting for a long time in front of TV makes our eyes very tired. TV has a lot of bad programs and wrong programs. So, we should take care.
بداية الفقرة ضعيفة، ولكن ممكن تضيفين
TV has so many advantages that you should know.
I added "al" to change the word "education" to an adjective.
In conclusion, TV is a good thing and bad thing
at the same time. If we use advantages of TV, it will be a good thing but, if we use disadvantages of TV, it will be a bad thing.