the (perfect essay writing) competition

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy Con .. plz help me with this >> I'm so stuck ..

it's not my bussiness , u r the one who mastaked her first and i imitated u

looooooool

i'll run away

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض congratulation for ur carrier and may Allah guide u always to success. although u hate teaching but i was impressed with ur correction cuz i remembered the old days when my teacher was correct just like ur way and give me the sheet with a great mess hhhh well, u should focus on ur job and come here to have fun correcting our mistakes lol and actually I'm as the same as u cuz i don't follow any rules in writing and i forget all the rules very quickly i just talk and write English by nature , can u see me a translator in the future like u ? lol i really like translating ,don't worry i won't envy u i already knocked on the wood hhhhh may Allah protect u and give u the success in ur job"translating not teaching i won't pray on u :4:"

Ooh that was too much on me guys
thanks thanks thanks

about translation : to be very honest I'm not very good at all.. I need to look up to my dictionary each time even the word is so recognizable to me .. it's not easy to became a translator but they didn't just accept me like that.. I did 2 exams and 1 interview before they told me that I was accepted to this field

It's very noticeable that ur English is very good & I can guarantee that ur future is already enlightened .. u are going to gain whatever u aim to

about not thinking of rules .. there was a time when I try to speak or write I think too much in this processes of grammar & tenses .. I was like concentrating on them and made my speech so stuttered .. therefore, I decided not to think of them anymore.. and I was right.. Alhamdallah I' can speak very smoothly .. this is the right method of learning.. just get an example and apply ur other speeches based on that..

thank u again.. & wanted to add that I haven't started yet my career, I just was told that I was finally accepted

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious it's not my bussiness , u r the one who mastaked her first and i imitated u looooooool i'll run away

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you've got to be kidding me

[English boy]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious does that blue water really give u energy ?a i'll buy it if this is true i really need energy

the best water I ever had

it's just called Energy water .. so blue with very little gases .. daaam why there's no any here in KSA

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة الملاك الأبيض hi every body , actually I'm so thankful for all of ur efforts and especially our judges and teachers con and English boy u were professional in ur correction and and especially con i really thank u for ur great efforts with us may allah bless u all guys :)

ok malak i'll tell u why i considered them wrong according to my point of view

first

actually i didn't notice that u haven't mentioned ramadan yet
also, coz i had known already that it is Ramadan, it seems odd for me when i read ( a whole one month) u know i usaully hear the article (the ) more than (a) a

i'll try to ask and inform u ok , u have a point in this *_^a

second

the V (join) doesn't need a preposition to connect it with the Object

we usually say

join the group , join the relatives ...etc

if i were u i would just say

many families join their relatives in Ramadan
instead of

many families join together with their relatives in Ramadan

together and with have the same meaning so try to avoid repeating words

third which is the most important Q

closeness and support are abstract words so they don't need articles

look more for that thing , we usually treat them like uncountable words

got it ?a

if u have any Q ask English boy, he is the boss here << dilemma

have to leave now see u guys in sha'a Allah

i really enjoyed being with u in this competition

[رغد محمد]

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Hello everybody

I'm back ... sOoOrry I was taking a rest of everything in my life>>and still

I miss you sOoOo much … I want to be honest with you sisters
and brother … I'm sOoOo happy that I was participate in this wonderful competition… I learned lots of things

Conscientious honey … whenever you are, you are glamour

Really since I now you, I became a different person … Thank you dear …Really thank you for everything honey… You are magnificent teacher... I will not forget you my friend... Never ever at all … you the reason after Allah to what I become right now … Thank you honey ...>> crying

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English boy … You are amazing teacher …really thank you

You made me feel happy with your words … I don't know what to say to both of you except I will pray and pray for both of you… I will not forget you at all ..Thanks ..Yeh .. right amm Congratulation for your new job

Really I've learned a lot … Thanks

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Ammmm

؟Can I ask you something? Am I the winner

Can if I'm the winner, I can't accept that … I'm sOoOorry I can't accept it really I can't coz I deliver my essay after the time that you give it to us

I just want know my mistakes nothing more … I wasn't looking for winning or anything else

؟؟؟Do you understand me

SoOoOo, the White Engle is the winner of this amazing competition

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I'm surprise that I took the highest marks … Really I feel proud of myself … that I've changed in one year … When I remember myself last year, I found that I was such a beginner in this language… however, I feel now much different that before

Con ... Thank you dear ... you are my best teacher ever … May Allah protect you and help you to be in health

May Allah reward you for everything you did it for me

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Ammmm

؟؟I'm sOoOo happy in this moment … I don't know why

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Malak … I congratulate you for being the winner… You deserve the best honey

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Miss … You are copy of me before … I've changed I wish I can back to be like you enthusiasm person ... Please be you and don't change honey … since I knew you, you still enthusiasm person … Masha'Allah … May Allah protect you dear … Thank you for your wonderful idea … Thank you from my heart

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Raghad

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[Conscientious]

subhan Allah , i remembered when i was correcting for u last year before u joined E department

now u r not Ragooooodah that i know

now masha'a Allah i can rely on u when i leave the forum, i'll be certain that there is someone deserve to take my place

i hope u benefit and all girls too

and we won't forget alfata , he did very well masha'a Allah

[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious it's not my bussiness , u r the one who mastaked her first and i imitated u looooooool i'll run away

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh come on guys u can't be judges with out a price .u really make me lough god bless u

[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة English boy the best water I ever had it's just called Energy water .. so blue with very little gases .. daaam why there's no any here in KSA

oooh god looks like u become addicted to it ,u should see a doctor because u r not gonna get any of this water in KSA hhh

[الملاك الأبيض]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Conscientious ok malak i'll tell u why i considered them wrong according to my point of view first actually i didn't notice that u haven't mentioned ramadan yet also, coz i had known already that it is Ramadan, it seems odd for me when i read ( a whole one month) u know i usaully hear the article (the ) more than (a) a i'll try to ask and inform u ok , u have a point in this *_^a second the V (join) doesn't need a preposition to connect it with the Object we usually say join the group , join the relatives ...etc if i were u i would just say many families join their relatives in Ramadan instead of many families join together with their relatives in Ramadan together and with have the same meaning so try to avoid repeating words third which is the most important Q closeness and support are abstract words so they don't need articles look more for that thing , we usually treat them like uncountable words got it ?a if u have any Q ask English boy, he is the boss here << dilemma have to leave now see u guys in sha'a Allah i really enjoyed being with u in this competition

i got it ,and i won't ask anything further more ,cuz i will be hit by u hhh

no really i understand ur point and thanx for ur explanation