مايش رأيكم في الرايتنق حقي ؟؟؟

[!..RahoOofa..!]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ABDU2010 وانا ساعدووووووني Jeddah is the second largest city after Riyadh, it is the main port of the Kingdom on the Red Sea and main gate through which most of the pilgrims arrive by air and sea to perform Umrah, Haj or to visit the two holy mosques. Area inhabited is more than 1,500 km, and population is more than one and half million. Jeddah is an industrial and active commercial center, with modern features, squares and courtyards. It is an important tourism center, with an eighty kilometer long beautiful corniche on the Red Sea coast. Jeddah also comprises the King Abdul Aziz University, King Abdul Aziz International Airport and Jeddah Islamic Port. King Fahd Fountain is located inside the Red Sea, near the coast, is an outstanding feature of the port of Jeddah particularly during the night when it sends beautiful colored water up to two hundred and sixty meters. بس ابغى اقسمها على جزئين ما اعرف ؟

يمديك تفصلو بانك تضيف سلبيات لجدة .. ضيف دا الببارقرات

However , like many other big cities , Jeddah has many problems . for example the traffic there is very bad. and because of the great numbers of factories there, the air became very polluted .

for me, I love living in Jeddah because it's beautiful city

نصيحة خلي كلماتك جدا بسيطة احسن واسهل في التصحيح واضمنلك للمارك .

[ABDU2010]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة !..rahooofa..! يمديك تفصلو بانك تضيف سلبيات لجدة .. ضيف دا الببارقرات however , like many other big cities , jeddah has many problems . For example the traffic there is very bad. And because of the great numbers of factories there, the air became very polluted . For me, i love living in jeddah because it's beautiful city نصيحة خلي كلماتك جدا بسيطة احسن واسهل في التصحيح واضمنلك للمارك .

صح كلامك انا ورط نفسي بكلمات صعبة .... بس البرقراف هذا اللي اديتيني هوا اخليي خاتمة احسن صح ؟؟

[ABDU2010]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة abdu2010 وانا ساعدووووووني jeddah is the second largest city after riyadh, it is the main port of the kingdom on the red sea and main gate through which most of the pilgrims arrive by air and sea to perform umrah, haj or to visit the two holy mosques. Area inhabited is more than 1,500 km, and population is more than one and half million. Jeddah is an industrial and active commercial center, with modern features, squares and courtyards. It is an important tourism center, with an eighty kilometer long beautiful corniche on the red sea coast. Jeddah also comprises the king abdul aziz university, king abdul aziz international airport and jeddah islamic port. King fahd fountain is located inside the red sea, near the coast, is an outstanding feature of the port of jeddah particularly during the night when it sends beautiful colored water up to two hundred and sixty meters. بس ابغى اقسمها على جزئين ما اعرف ؟

يا دكتورة

[Dr.Passed]

انا خلصتو والموضوع 100 % مافي اخطاء يعني لاتغير ولا تلعب في و الفل مارك في يدك بإذن الله بس اكتبو هنا ولا ارسلو على الخاص عشان ما ينصرق؟ ههههههه

[Dr.Passed]

One of the things I enjoy doing with my spare time is playing football. This sport is made up of two different teams who play against each other for a 90 minute duration. While playing you are not allowed to touch the ball with your hands, otherwise it will be turned over to the other team. Football in Saudi Arabia is my favorite, because in that country they are very strict about their rules.


My two favorite teams are Real Madrid from Spain and Al - Ettihad from Saudi Arabia because those two teams have a lot of very good players. Majed Abdullah who played from 1977 until 1998 was a very good player for Saudi Arabia. Sami Al - Jaber who played from 1998 until 2008 was also one of the best players. Last but not least is Al - Thinian who played from 1984 until 2005. All of these players were members on the Saudi Arabia team.


The sport of Football can get very dangerous though, and many times people end up injured. Sometimes people get a little too aggressive and end up tackling other players, putting them at risk of injury. I have played football since the year 2000 and played very well. I will continue to play for years to come, and improve more and more every year.

[تركي4444]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة dr.passed one of the things i enjoy doing with my spare time is playing football. This sport is made up of two different teams who play against each other for a 90 minute duration. While playing you are not allowed to touch the ball with your hands, otherwise it will be turned over to the other team. Football in saudi arabia is my favorite, because in that country they are very strict about their rules. My two favorite teams are real madrid from spain and al - ettihad from saudi arabia because those two teams have a lot of very good players. Majed abdullah who played from 1977 until 1998 was a very good player for saudi arabia. Sami al - jaber who played from 1998 until 2008 was also one of the best players. Last but not least is al - thinian who played from 1984 until 2005. All of these players were members on the saudi arabia team. The sport of football can get very dangerous though, and many times people end up injured. Sometimes people get a little too aggressive and end up tackling other players, putting them at risk of injury. I have played football since the year 2000 and played very well. I will continue to play for years to come, and improve more and more every year.

والله مررررة شكرا >>> الى مالانهاية شووووكرا


يارب تحقق احلامك وطموحتك ويجزاكي عن كل حرف كتبيته ملايين الحسنات

ويوفقك ويسهل دربك وتتيسر امورك

ومعليش انا اسف تعبتك معايا

[Dr.Passed]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة تركي4444 والله مررررة شكرا >>> الى مالانهاية شووووكرا يارب تحقق احلامك وطموحتك ويجزاكي عن كل حرف كتبيته ملايين الحسنات ويوفقك ويسهل دربك وتتيسر امورك ومعليش انا اسف تعبتك معايا

امين اجمعين كلنا انشاءالله...ما في تعب انا احب اكتب بالعكس.
طبعا الموضوع كل paragraph يبدأ من اليسار لليمين يعني طبعا انتا محا تبدأ كتابة من النص زي ما سويت انا. الشي التاني اطمن الموضوع ما في اخطاء وسليم كون واثق بإذن الله

[تركي4444]

DR.passed رهووووفة MAY als



والله كفيتو ووفيتو الله يوفقكم كلكم ويسهل دربكم وينور طريقكم ويرزقكم من حيث لا تحتسبون




اشكركم كلكم على الوقت اللي ضيعتوه في كتابة التعبير وفي موازين حسناتكم يارب


وياليت كل العالم زيكم يحبو المساعدة لوجه الله بدون مصلحة او فائدة



( مع تقديري وامتناني واحترامي لكم ) واكررشكري لكم على جهدكم الرائع


وسامحوني تعبتكم معايا

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[ووجدداان]

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