اتمنى ترتبو لي هذه اذا ممكن

[سعود السويحان]

السلام عليكم والرحمة من الله وبركاتة
اشكر اعضاء هذا المنتدى على حلهم لمشاكلي من صميم قلبي ..
وكما هي العاددة عودتي داءما تحمل في جعبتها مشكلة جديدة تنتظر حل منكم ..ْْ~~

سؤال يقول ماهو الخطاء في ترتيب هذه الجمل ..
look at the text about Helena . what is wrong with the organization?

My sister,Helena, is an English teacher .She teaches in a secondary school in Lisbon , Portugal. The school is near her flat ,so she usually walks to work.

she arrives at work at 8 oclock in the morning and she leaves school at about 3 or 4 in the afternoon, In the evening she marks homework and prepares lessons for the following day.

At the weekends she is also busy, but with her family and friends. She shops for food at the local market, visits relativs, and spends time withe her husband.

In the summer, if the weather is good , she likes having a barbecue with friends and family by the beach.

وشكرا جزيلا جزيلا لكم

[سعود السويحان]

شباب تكفون عندي تقيم عليها ولازم اعرف حلها