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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رويده عباس I write this thoughts yesterday so please correct me i was a girl with a long curls hear with a big shiny smail with soft happy dreams i saw the beards flew and sing i saw the sun glows as a golden ring i was a happy girl now""" hear i am my tears never dry my sorrow never die lived in sadness and gloom waiting the happenss to bloom i was a girl

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you have small mistakes

just in the dictation which may change all the meaning

and that well be sometimes very dangerous when you translate



i was a girl with a long curls hear =Hair

with a big shiny smail=smile

with soft happy dreams

i saw the beards=Birds flew and sing

i saw the sun glows as a golden ring

i was a happy girl

now""" hear=Here i am

my tears never dry

my sorrow never die

lived in sadness and gloom

waiting the happenss to bloom

i was a girl