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[رغد محمد]

Thoughts….
Sometimes when you think you own this world….
You have the key of everything …..
You control the people around you ….
You know the answer of any question….
You the light that every person looks up to be like you ….
You the happiness for the people around you …
You the helper for everyone …
You have faith in yourself…..
Just……
One mistake from you and you will see all kinds of hated, jealousy, envy, and disappoiment from the people who you love, and care…
So you have to be a strong person to face all kinds of people...
You have to be like the high tree that is attacked by all people…
I mean be the high tree, and do not be the one who scaled….

[عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد thoughts…. Sometimes when you think you are the owner of this world…. You have the keys of everything ….. You have control the people around you …. You know the answers of any question…. You are the light that every person looks up to be like you …. You have the happiness for the people around you … you the helper for everyone … you have faith in yourself….. Just…… one mistake from you make you will see all kinds of hated, jealousy, envy, and disappoiment from the people who you love, and care… here i go against what you think because who love never he hate you or has jealousy or envy all time he pray allah for you and he hope you agood luke like your mother and your closest friend :) sorry sister it is my opinion :) so you have to be a strong person to face all kinds of people... You have to be like the high tree that is attacked by all people… i mean be the high tree, and do not be the one who scaled….

معليش على التصحيح علما محد طلب منى بس حبيت اتفلسف واشارك
:)

ابلة كون تصحيحي صح؟

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة عبدالله بن عبدالرحمن معليش على التصحيح علما محد طلب منى بس حبيت اتفلسف واشارك :) ابلة كون تصحيحي صح؟

thoughts….
Sometimes when you think you are the owner of this world….

both of u and Ragad are correct

You have the keys of everything …..

both are correct

You have control the people around you ….

u r wrong , why did u add HAVE?a

You know the answers of any question….

both are correct

You are the light that every person looks up to be like you ….
u r excellent

You have the happiness for the people around you …

i think Ragad's sentence is better

you the helper for everyone …
you have faith in yourself…..
Just……
one mistake from you make you will see all kinds of hated,

Excellent MashaAllah, but u need to replace (will) before MAKE so the sentence will be

one mistake from u will make u see all ....etc



Good job

[Conscientious]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة رغد محمد Thoughts…. Sometimes when you think you own this world…. You have the key of everything ….. You control the people around you …. You know the answer of any question…. You are the light that( in which) every person looks up to be like you …. You are the happiness for the people around you … You are the helper for everyone … You have faith in yourself….. Just…… One mistake from you and you will( will lead u to) see all kinds of hated( hatred), jealousy, envy, and disappoiment from the people whom you love, and care (about)a … So you have to be a strong person to face all kinds of people... You have to be like the high tree that is attacked by all people… I mean be the high tree, and do not be the one who scaled(vague word) ….

wonderful Ragudah

keep up ur work