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[ابو فهد*]

Dear Raghad

While this saying have some merit on surface

This sentence is quite lateral translation which is most common mistake

however when children spend more than four hours daily on television, then they would probably watch some bad inappropriate scenes such as violence, sex, or they might hear a bad use for language which they would apply it later as a part of their imitation of their loveable characters like Batman or Superman.

These thesis statements are little complicated, pleas see my correction

However, some children spend almost four hours daily watching TV, so they might watch some bad or inappropriate scenes, such as acts of violence, sexual photos, or hear a bad use of language. They would apply that later as a part of their behavior, they do that to imitate their loveable characters, like Batman and Superman

Violetta

You are welcome and our teachers will check your writing soon, plaese excuse me now because my Internet connection is very low, after tomorrow I will be in Jeddah and I will check it

Note: don't hesitate to ask me about anything, but after tomorrow, because my writing exam will be on Sat. 9/7/1432


Best regards