احتاج مساعدهـ في اختبار القياس ولكم الاجر

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المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة emandong هذا تعبيري .. [ هو قصير بس إن شآء آلله في الاختبار بحط جمل اكثر .. احس مشكلتي في تكرار الكلمات .. وعدم ترابط الموضوع ] Eid Al-Fitr After spending spirtual and blessing times in Ramadan, we receive the happiest .day for each Muslim which is Eid Al-Fitr .It comes in the first day of Shawwal month firstly, we go to Eid prayer.Then we meet the neighbours and relatives to say:"happy Eid". At that moment, Old .people give the childern and young Eidiah Finally, I love Eid Day because relatives congratulates .each others more than any time .................................................. ........................................ قيموني من 10 عشان اعرف مستوايا ! u deserve 6 out of 10

dear Eman

u're writing it looks good but u have to do ur best

in reading books to improve ur language more and more


thank u for ur encourage