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They Flee from Me: Text of the Poem

They flee from me that sometime did me seek, With naked foot stalking in my chamber. I have seen them gentle tame and meek That now are wild and do not remember That sometime they put themselves in danger To take bread at my hand; and now they range Busily seeking with a continual change.


Thanked be fortune, it hath been otherwise Twenty times better; but once in special, In thin array after a pleasant guise, When her loose gown from her shoulders did fall, And she me caught in her arms long and small; And therewith all sweetly did me kiss, And softly said, "Dear heart, how like you this?"


It was no dream, I lay broad waking; But all is turned thorough my gentleness Into a strange fashion of forsaking; And I have leave to go of her goodness And she also to use newfangleness. But since that I so kindly am served


وش المقصود ؟
وش اللي نفهمه؟
الخلاصة؟

[ابو سامي 30]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة riyahd They Flee from Me: Text of the Poem They flee from me that sometime did me seek, With naked foot stalking in my chamber. I have seen them gentle tame and meek That now are wild and do not remember That sometime they put themselves in danger To take bread at my hand; and now they range Busily seeking with a continual change. Thanked be fortune, it hath been otherwise Twenty times better; but once in special, In thin array after a pleasant guise, When her loose gown from her shoulders did fall, And she me caught in her arms long and small; And therewith all sweetly did me kiss, And softly said, "Dear heart, how like you this?" It was no dream, I lay broad waking; But all is turned thorough my gentleness Into a strange fashion of forsaking; And I have leave to go of her goodness And she also to use newfangleness. But since that I so kindly am served وش المقصود ؟ وش اللي نفهمه؟ الخلاصة؟

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