ابي منكم تصححولي هذا التعبير بلييز

[دلوعة حدي ومحد قدي]

السلاااام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ،،،،


كيفكم ان شاء الله كويسيين ،،،


الله يسعدكم ابيكم تساعدوني هذا التعبير متعوب شخصي بس ابيكم تصححولي اذا فيه اخطاء والاستاذه قالتلي احط adj , adv كثير ،،،


Tarzan

One sunny day, there were a parents have a child Tarzan. They were on cruse. The ship was sunk. The parents died. Then Tarzan had been living in island with Gorilla. One of them takes him and takes care of himself. He was growing up with that Gorilla which loves him. After a long time. Gain and her father came to this island to study about Gorilla. When they came Tarzan know him a human. Tarzan love Gain. She is very beautiful. He was not to many her. Gina left her father and lives in inland with Tarzan. Her father cannot leave her and live alone. He gets back to inland and all of them were live at a happy live.

الله يخليكم ابيه ضروري ،،،

[Alshehri10]

وش ذآ وين الفوآصل كلها نقآط ؟ ههههه معليش بس ابغآ اقولك انهم يركزون كثير فيهآ خصوصا عند بدايه كل جمله وحرف الكآبيتل .. بالتوفيق ,

[omar001]

it's correct