اريد مساعدة في تحسين البرجراف ..

[Bassam99]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة فيونكـه A Thief in The House .The incident occurred about a year ago.We got back into our house but suddenly we started hearing a strange sound . Then we felt that there is a burglar in the house My younger sister started crying which led the theif to appear with his gun . In that moment we scared . .I was thinking of fighting the theif but i reneged on my decision and preferred to call the policemen . That was our problem,how to use the phone when this theif browbeat to throw the bullet . Any way suddenly someone opened the door and the policemen spreaded around the thief . The story was that our neighbour felt there was a strange moves in our house when we was outside it .He preferred to call the police . Finally , the thief was caught on and took him to jail . In the end , We felt safe after the arrest of the thief and Thankfully nobody touch injured and we got a good feeling that we had a good neighbour.

policemen = police
والثانية بدون him
والثالثة صحيحة لكن إذا كانت صعبة تقدر تقول got hurt

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